Asian slob, your weight lifting days are gone
Shiit.. neck n arms already have more folds than your paper swans
Solid opener.
Your moodswings harder then you can throw hands son
An the only fatal Boxin you practised is putting a dead mum in one
My word lol. This was a good bar. The moodswings line was good. I always give props for good setups or punching in the set up. “Fatal boxing” wordplay in itself was just okay at best, but the angle is harsh af and it tied into the setup well.
Cus he shops on amazon to help when hes depressed
N buys razor blades with no reviews as they clearly work the best
Thought this was a miss. The angle is cool, the punch just wasn’t that good.
Bipolar mess, fights depression with cuts he nuts
..must suck you can only listen to Pharrel Williams' Happy one day each month
I didn’t like this bar but up to this point you’re doing a good job of attacking your opponent with the depression angle.
N wordplays dead bruv, these days gun bars all the rage
So imma launch the Bucks til you loaded... cus you cant accept the Change
Another well done personal. Punch landed. The buck/change wp has been done plenty, but the way you used it was fresh.
you jus a clone of cronus, honed his style while i dug yo past apart
Finding out your asian was LULZ cus course you bit something that Barks
This is dope and funny.
N i see ur edits last minute tryna add a howler like a faggot coward
verse going through more chop and change than Henry The Eighths marriage counsellor
Ehh. I get the bar but i don’t really care for it.
RN you in the NC archives lookin for ideas to reuse em again
so im exhuming the corpse of that exhuman just to do it to death
This was pretty slick. Nice personal. And I like how it ties into the next bar. Only critique is you wouldn’t call a dead person a exhuman right? Unless it’s a reference I didn’t catch.
..Cus your not a tough guy, ur the bipolar lost his touch type
I had to bring up ur dead mum to remind you what a cold hard body looks like
Lettuce pray. This is sick. You set this up nice af.
You're always last to be picked in battling events. should've fled dummy
If anyone says 'get wel on the card!' it's for signing 1 i'll send barc w/ creds money
I liked the name flip but I thought the punch was odd. Thought it would be a punch directed at putting Jay in the hospital. The wp pretty slick though.
Fly out my goons to maim the UK, we grip steel then aim it at prey
& Everyone Influenza cold killer w/ the hawks, ur whole team catch avian strains
This is slick af. The subtle tie ins that you add you your wordplay (prey/hawk/avian flu/cold/avian) is dope.
Besides Brits ain't want u to rep since skills lack clear; u wack queer
Now u'll take revenge, but they knew u couldn't 'command a 'ship' w/ that shitty blackbeard
This was just okay.
Plug up this dumbfuck in dirty dishwater. I'll drown up his face
Call me a Flo Stopper. cuz the Synchros up while I connected his mouth to the drain
This was just decent. Once again it’s like all of the phrases he uses have some sort of tie in which is dope. The problem is he synchros wp is obscure af. I had to google and kinda so quick research to find out what tf a synchros was and how it tied in to the bar. Also it’s nitpicky but saying the sink rose is kind of a stretch to describe the water rising.
It's best to keep a guard dog to alert cops when yo head gets beat
After i bash your Melancholy the rescue breed bringing help to the depressive scene
This was nice. Same thing - clean wp and tie ins all throughout the set up and punch. Wording slightly off but pretty dope bar.
By heavens grace u'll rest in a better place cuz i shoot great
These bullets will travel Enya & 'only time will tell' if Real lives to see a new age
I liked this. Simple and effective. All your wp coming off clean so far.
Lol @ yo catfished ex in hot or thot...c'mon nobody believin u smash
You thot 'hidin behind a fake picture made it safe' but nah ur just easier to crack
I might be missing one if the tie ins here but the think the crack/safe wp pretty basic. I like the angle but the punch wasn’t quite there.
Worked your way to finals vs Muff but they're no lines anyone quoted
I won't short change the fact ur raise from low to midtier resembled Finnys promotion
Pretty funny. I think the fact that someone else had a finny flip took away from this a bit. S/o to finny on the promotion though.
This a kick in the rear, i'm the reason u champed when nick disappeared
How ironic I gave u the Rookie accomp & made you look like the biggest one here
Pretty good closer. I liked the angle.
This battle was fire.
To me, inf has one of the sharpest pens I’ve seen in my short time on NC. The lyricism; the crisp, unforced wp; the complexity; plus the ability to punch was all on display here. Unfortunately, Jay Welsh just kinda left earth in this one.
Jay matched Inf’s lyricism to an extent and added complexity in that in a lot of his bars, he was building on the previous bar. But what stood apart was I feel Jay really broke down and attacked Inf with his verse.
I thought he executed personals as good as you can. He stayed on topic, he developed his angles well, and he was punching at the end of all his personals. Plus his material hit hard af. So even though inf was a bit more consistent, Jay had the more impactful lines. Inf prob coulda edged if coulda put together a few haymakers like he did the last week.
Mvgt Welsh
Salute to both you guys.
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