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Old 04-28-2018, 12:01 PM   #2
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dope.

technically sound. i fucks with the approach, tho. got the vibe of a flex piece while treading the self-consciousness theme that's so prevalent in much of your work.

the ending was the highlight to me. keep scribing, pawtna.
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