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Old 05-30-2013, 11:24 AM   #6
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Damn good drop here JW. I gotta agree with Objective this felt kinda like a poem to me. But this was like the majority of your posts in that it's deeply personal and extremely relatable. Very nice.
The opening section to me was the best part. Nice use of multis there to start the piece off strong. In all honesty I'd say to add some more on to this man and make it a longer piece because I would enjoy to read a longer piece by you holmes. Keep droppin man and hopefully after the playoffs are over we can finally hit up that collab.
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