you got potential but withdraw cause u got no talent
he can't deposit a consistent verse when his accounts are out of balance
NOT BAD BUT FELT THE SET UP COULDA BEEN BETTER
aint slick w/ hoes, they see u as a behind doors cock thruster
ladies say my GameFly while yours'll shutdown whats in store like Blockbuster
GOOD CONCEPT BUT POOR WORDING MADE THIS GO NOWHERE
this pathetic virgin needs to phone 911, his future's hopeless
the only hot twins he's been close to collapsed when he approached them
9/11 TOWER CONCEPTS ARE PLAYED, NICE TRY THO
fuck rap, maestro couldn't get out this slump, it's the truth
if he really this old.. then this nika been trashsince that guy was n his youth
PLAYED CONCEPT
im done went u, u trash so I went 10 instead of 12
cause u write like u was inspired by TI lyrics from when he was in jail
NOT FEELING
VS
... Its obvious death is about to die in shame/
cos wit Meduzza's power of mine.. I could make his life standstill without trying to tie him in pain/
NOT FEELING, JUST AN EMPTY THREAT WITH NO PUNCH TO UR OPPONENT AND IT WAS TOO STRETCHED
the niggurh should take a binocular,.. And watch his mouth/
cos the pig.. Digging up for vet's line would end up incapacitated when i punch his snout/
SEEMS LIKE YOUR ARE JUST MULTI RHYMING COS I SEE NO CREATIVITY HERE, ITS JUST A STATEMENT
do i have to pull nines to make him take to his heel/
make him spit icing and sugary lines.. When ipunch cake in his chin/
HEEL DOESNT RHYME WITH CHIN
Death should know/
that he ain't ahead of God.. the tricks would show/
STATEMENT, YOU'VE GOT TO BE WITTY!
he could be a motherless fagg, so i'll endeavour to murder him/
cos like he ain't a day-student in the vet's school, i'll bother him/boarder~digg
NAH, THIS WORDPLAY DIDNT REALLY WORK, BOTHER IS A VERB AND BOARDER IS A NOUN, SO U CANT BOARDER SOMEONE, SO THIS PUN FAILS BUT ITS YOUR BEST ATTEMPT YET
i'll be fast to drop bars on him like i'd get paid by chocolate factory/
make him bleed honourarily like slashing consulate artery/
WACK, A CONSULATE IS A BUILDING FOR DIPLOMATS, I DONT UNDERSTAND HOW SOMEONE CAN SLASH A BUILDING'S ARTERY AND MAKE IT BLEED...WTF!!
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Well, no chasers straight up this was a wack match. Death did show some dim flashes of brilliant and he seems to understand the concept of dissing,wordplays,punches etc, however he needs a lot of work and he might just be fine if he keeps practicing. On the underhand maestro lacks pretty much in every aspect. Firstly do not FREEPOST when people say ur piece is wack, the only way to get better is staying humble and learning from each feed on what to improve on..that said, cut out those slashes and hints cos there useless, then stop forcing multies. This aint just about rhyming words for the sake of it, u have to be creative, learn to think outside the box and use personals, nameplays, misdirections..etc. Mvgt death for having the better attempts
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