[2tripple0]

Yeah im trying to keep it structured only want to get it right bit keep getting it to a point im unsure if its any good or not like it was just a waste of time.... i'll try to use your concept though of adding filler er whatever but it still feels incomplete and i did enjoy your piece and im sorry if you thought i didnt like it... but thanks for the feed...just want this tp feel right is all like i did enough...