[El Muffin]

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Okay. Ill be the first . y'all shook. And for good reason ..

Lol but fr Niggas need to chill tf out

I'm going into this nervous first time reading both completely

mao. k did u have to? im basically baffled
cuh the only thing u been Lifting is ur disqualifications in battles
(Ha . good personal )
had ya L vs hush reversed. urself spitting nice is doubted
using a 'con template' for every verse w/o thinking twice about it
(Pretty cool . using s contemplate just reading that is odddd but the wp works and the tie in is slick so cool)
recycle, flip, recycle, reach... the style's fag-like & see-thru
u aint SQUAT but keep the front going and bags might believe u
(Seen a lot of squat lines /bags/lifting angles his one didn't stand out)
if iont see barc/Al in rd 2, im prepared to take a lotta heat
Infallible matchup that cudnt possibly fail to make us fall asleep
(That setup is why niggas don't want to vote xD but the wp.. Idk I'm sounding it out 10x inf al a bull .. Im saying it over n over n its not translating CLESRLY n that's the thing with wp I shouldn't be doing that.. Tie ins are there so maybe the phonetics get by next person)
beat u 4x but lost1 by a vote aka greasy calls. hell of a joke
Barcelona round here, while U tenda keep ye balls outta ur posts
(Ok but fuck this shit is not striking me as hot :ehh ok( )
even admitted u got got. i saved the pm.. yes its fkn cheap
im keeping Tabs, but that dont mean u Can recycle ery other wk
(Bang bang SIMPLE BUT SLICK I LIKE THIS)
these is facts, believe me. this cheating cat's the eeeasiest
smbdy best make infirmaries gonna need one after reading this
(Ugh :( )
feeling under the weather? yea cuz what sickens u is beef
so if the doc asks for a stool sample
.. take one from ur face after i hit u w/ my seat
(The whole idea of stool sample because u hit him with one is blah to me)
dont dodge me yo. ima land more but u shud bring it, rookie
or optimus this battle cz u do transform into the biggest pussy
(This one was followed clear this is the right way . like )
caught this fgt in the archives yall. he's farrr beyond a bitch
if he leaves here w/ the cheese, its cuz he havarti wants ta flip
( I love the tie in in the beginning . the wp just uhh this is eh ok)

4 quotes
4 misses
Second look 2 eh oks

Fuck . that was a struggle. Much anxiety I can't wait to see pplz take on some if those concepts and if they have same issues/difficulties I did. its all phonetics

Some if the wp was immediately processed n others I found myself sounding them out over n over to no avail

Biggest problem with wp rears its ugly head . hits based on individuals perception n I Fucking hate it coz I want to see why you used them. I know they can't be too bad



saw Bayou beast! guy unleashed hell. u aint sway it's truth
You could say Blue Buffalo cuz 'we didnt hear a Barc' while dog ate your food
( creative but the reference was weird lol like a dig good brand I'm adduminh? Eh)
I out muscle weak mf'kers, dude needs a quick fix to blow steam
Punches dont pack any PowerBar, strongest hits show ya deficient in protein
(Cool)
Ur bitch pulled me under & said 'lets b more than would-be lovers'
She'd spread for Mauradin I stole her heart after leavin the fuckin' pussy plundered
(Word play done right . ma rod in . tie ins there cool)
And your style = retarded wordplay. At the core it's worthless
Must be on a mission to butcher grammar w/the 'special forces' in ya verses
(Idk why but butcher messed up the transition to ur tie ins but this is ok)
The whole squadd masked up, gat tucked, try to remedy solutions
After guns blow the smokestack body on top of body til ya scenes heavily polluted
(Ok . the compounded way u did that was ok .. But not too impressive)
Bars dead meat. yo i'ma f'kin bury this loser of a textcee
Nigga it's bad blood. & I'll be 'hidin the body for yearsss' under my crib like hep c
(Eghhh )
Silencer on the K, send shots til you echo the craziest shrill
U'll hear ch ch ch then ah ah ah. Gun sound Jason Voorhees before makin da kill
(Eghhh kinda weird when u actually sounding it out . like the ch ch ch part is fine but ah ah ah .. Eghhh)
Ya HOF dont owe respect. Cro'd shark lines w/ no regrets
Barbital his good shit back then &&& now every drop we feelin those effects
(Niiiice )
Bitch, sway & sign out 24/7. meltdown everytime this geek'll get beat
U such a jerkoff 'round the clock' it'd make Amen discipline ya & leave for the week
(Cool close)

4 quotes
4 misses
Edit: second look :2 oks


Oh god

*sigh*

I HATE YIU NIGGSS

*scrolls up* tied on quotes n misses I have to see who had more ok lines n if they were better than their opponents

Oksyyyy and we have a winner by a cunt hair

I fw you both so I don't want to hear it . I really tried my best here

Due to infs 2 ok lines n bsrcs 2 ehh oks which to me? Aren't complete misses?

I got inf

Very close though


V/infiltrate