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Old 04-20-2018, 10:59 AM   #15
Jabari Black
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Blue

a newer era top tier writer?! lmaoo i hate to break the news..
Tristan & Khloe could name it…RAISE it…& that STILL wouldn’t make it True

Came out slower than Cred. Felt like you put more emphasis on the current event reference than he actual punch.

be a classic?! i don’t believe you & not because ur known to fret..
..because it’s already Wednesday morning & I don’t have a new opponent yet

Pretty good. Blue heating up.

clap this gun that - no way that bullshit is testin these flurries..
ironic every bars a ‘focus on MAGS’ & that’s all u’ll be doin the rest of the tourney

Dope.

guysss im worried. i usually sweep battles cuz I drop the hits..
but to Discredits hard… guy has no rep & has literally NEVER accomplished shit

This was just okay. Pretty basic Cred flip.

Pinot raped u week 10 & now ur scared shitless, stressin the brawl..
so ill cock the 38 & put the 'two-digits to ur neck' while ur busy Checkin for Pulse

This was special. LOTB. Bar had the complete package.

what the hell Cred. fuck this bracket & all the crap you spew..
bleak didn't make the Finalist?! even HE has a better chance of being that then you

This was just okay. Final list/finalist wp wasn’t that crazy. Also you had a good deal lines where you had a word play then the punch references the earlier word play so that takes away slightly (this plus the Superseding and Credenza lines)

thanks for the bye-week. ur seasons over this is truly a spanking..
soon as I saw the Superseding i KNEW i’d be doing that to you in the rankings

Pretty good but see above.

he's not a killer. if it pops off he’ll run back to his dwelling in droves..
this so called Hardboil get Egged On…but once Shells go off there’s a 'yellow belly exposed'

I thought this was dope. The egg word association might have been basic but it was executed very well. The boil boy’ll wp was very dope.

aint nuthin but NBL’s cheerleader so thinking ur a threat’s a joke..
u aint got Stockholm’s… on the boards u just act Sweden hope it gets you votes

Pretty good.

basic & unreadable. line by line I swear this bore is the worst..
Credenza punch & i SWEAR i’d rather be slammed thru 1 than read any more of the verse

I thought this landed but see what I said above.


Cred

& dog ur jus a tourist - even if they’re sayin ur as hot as me
Bitch I’m Martin Lawrence.. Blue Streak is ending with a robbery

This is fire. Good opener

Stomach shot like Manalo or catch 50 rounds from the fofo’
Big Stick, this shit ‘ll have u bouncin off the ground like a pogo

You had a pogo bar either last battle or the week before. It was fine when you used it as a set up but not strong enough for a punch.

Blues boo a freak. Head while I drive so we don’t ruin seats
Soon as u asleep. I’m pullin up on ur bitch wit the beef.. Uber Eats

Okay. Simple.


Bullets blow ur organs into ur hands or fire n tear ur brains apart
Flame to ur chest. got u walkin round like u holdin the Sacred Heart

Lol this is fire. Haymaker

Nigga I’m ruthless! Death threats have em like a protected witness
Idgaf about Blue Tips.. cus that’s what I load the AR wit for snitches

I’m surprised I’ve never never heard a blue tip (or red/orarange/etc-tip) line before. If URL niggas see this they bout to have a field day lol. Dope line. Good nameflip.

They counted me out but I’m clappin back at what’s mine
If that baby k don’t get u, the big K will. That’s how u capitalize

Pretty good. Punch landed.

Ur dead fag! Desert eagle cocked n this grip do damage
Shit s’like a Cred mag - u gettin smoked wit a big ass cannon

I guess you gotta flip yourself before they flip you...word to B Rabbit lol. Dope line though.

This dudes crazy! No pussy gettin fag. How u smooth wit ladies?
Wen Beyoncés newborn was the last time some1 called Blue a baby

This was just okay. The reference is outdated. And blue a baby/ blue baby is kinda a stretch. Nit picky but still.

We seen ur pic vs nik-A. & we supposed to believe that u sell piff?
Rightttt..
& Muff sells bricks.. For the net u Fake the Cop on some Zelph shit

Thought this was a really good line and I thought it was Cred’s best line. The personal (including the setup), the fake the cop wp, and the punch were all executed perfectly to me. Slightly behind Blue’s check the pulse line for LOTB.

U wudnt squeeze if it had a laser, plus u fuckin suck wit ur rhymes
Can’t even shoot a taser.. dog we ain’t Shocked by none of ur Lines

Too simple. Felt like filler to get to 20.

Fire battle. Extremely close. You got consistency and slick wordplay and writing from Blue vs Cred’s verse with slightly more misses but some heavier punches. Thought it was ironic that Blue’s best line was a gun bar and Cred’s best was a personal/wp line.

Slightly edged the battle to Cred. Thought he has a few more big moments in the battle. Salute to both you guys though.

Mvgt Cred
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