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Old 04-14-2018, 10:57 PM   #9
El Muffin
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You were created bitchmade truthfully your not a killer get the fuck off the scene
Your signs of Rampage were seeing Dwayne Johnson and George the Gorilla on big screen
( I'm so far removed from film rn iono what movie u talking bout or anything . not yr fault its just me n I am an individual voter)
I'll lean towards your bitch i can tell your a little Jelly
Say something fag ill hop off that Mound and punch you in the head like Joe Kelly
(Ehhh . barely)
Blade slicing better than the local deli, terrible what it will do to your organs
Bounty on ur head so when i leave u all bloody better cop some that are fast absorbing
(Good concept kinda shoddy wording ok line)
Mom n dad still supporting his ass, having a future is very slim
Even i feel bad ill give 25 to Lyf, i know fucking prisoners eating better than him
(Meh Tbh)

I love u Joe but wording plodding as hell here . usually ur concepts are better too

m sitting on the Throne while this tool in the basement.
It would be ubsurd to proclaim JoKing; unless that's the expression being used when it's Stated.
( like the swagger but kinda stretched considering everything.. Kinda cool thio)

I'm bruising this fake prick, that'll give u some shine u stupid bitch.
So if you ever hear that it's Bos Time? It's just Michael Cole when Sasha's music hits.
(Wah)
I'm heading for the End Zone, yet breaking ankles; fast like Kyrie.
Boston Garden his territory just to get crushed and replaced, that's a TD.
(Concept fire tie ins fire last part unavoidably ass. U had no choice I get it considering u used the words associated elsewhere)

...I'm hittin 3s bro, u missing free throws...

It's easy to put Dogs down, no need 4 the pistol my fists is lethal.
an after I'll have JBs head hangin from the wall like the Kingsmen Sequel.
(Ok)

Hmmm yeah I got gamble

His verse strikes me as the winner

V/ gamgam
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