when i drop, im droppin ape shit. when U drop, ur droppin basic
lines are such a letdown, militaries use em for helicopter opperations
(As far as the letdown/helicopter concept .. That's ok I suppose . a little loose of an association but its there)
u'll never be top 10 & thats nothing less than the truth
if u ever have a foot in the door, ur having a domestic dispute
( this was like above but I think this was much more creative n actually a lot more vivid nice)
yeah i talk my shit in chat.. slaughter vets & then disperse
im just planting seeds of doubt, u water them w/ every verse
(Nice could of used a few subtleties to draw this out for maximum effect because you had room for it considering how well worded the setup n precursor to punch was. As is its still effective )
i pack this barrel w. a tactic; spare u the blues part
aka bring smoke to the back of this cat. its harold and kumar
( see this reference is one of yours that I just can't remember its been so long since I've watched the movies n I don't remember n won't till u say something n I'm like OHHHHHH . sure other ppl will but I don't atm similar to ur jumanji shit)
im BOUT the crime & if help arrives fa' u on site..
itll be after a big bang, only to find the Sheldon Eyeing u of life
( this is a definite no to me. See wat u did but not my cup if tea just reading the wp n how it progress into the tie in just made me cringe)
orrr ill get ya chick ta taste my cock & settle the fued
roll up wit my whip n take ur rock. the temple of doom
( oh . THIS was cute tho)
ur girl unbuckles plenty of belts, too many to tell papa
run some game n that tail will suck anything -cell saga
(Yes. Was thinking u could if said something other than run some games but I'm lying coz nothings striking me that's more applicable)
im normally keying my bars but homey's needing a loss
if i put any effort into M. Bison trouble, he wont be beating the boss
( see ? This is wordplay I can fuck with!! The tie in following compact n seamless! More if this less if Sheldon eye WTF ever)
meet me@ ur favorite club in da 6. get finger width apart, fool
id literally Shit on ur whole existence, then hit u w/ a bar stool
( this one just didn't hit me I think I'm missing it but I'm not going to keep reading it just one if those bars where it underwhelmed me but seems like it should be ok)
i keeps wp like "uterus pond" just to off-set & amuse
either way u cant knock me if ur name look like a concept that id use
( clever self deprecation angle butt no nigga I'm not gonna let you make it xD hahaha interesting you'd do that though I think others might like it I was humored by the approach n think it's a wise move to the ill informed but I just had a sly grin like " uhuh nigga" offset n amuse my ASS xD u thought shit was swell till u caught flak! xD
Hahaha interesting verse in all actuality t had a lil bit of verything in it .. Maybe not a dickkicker punch but very much a good read just a few moments there that I personally didn't fuck with like ur closer I had to look at you with that with that face like ole boy from url n wild n out .. What's his name lol the one in all the memes lol. Like
Me: come on in my dog don't bite
Dog: *insert face*
Edit: CONCEITED there we go
Lmao but yeah ..
Ok
Blue bayou ...
saw this comment & thought this mutha'fucka HAS to be kiddin..
never bit? ya & ur tattoos cool, u dont sway in PMs, & make millions cuttin grass for a livin!
( effective open)
surprise surprise u signed back in - netcees biggest herb on the scene..
forget a Black Eye.. ur a broken orbital, glaucoma, AND retinal burn on the league
(List punch . this one is above avg but not a quote)
i’m ya IDOL. quit talkin like someone i've started to fear..
you lose a battle & there’s so many 'Out'-posts we'll colonize Mars in a year
(Lnaoooo this was HARD)
its sad really. cry baby you ain’t handlin me..
every time Juventus so appalling it’s more proof ur not in this Champions League
(You vent is/us it works when you let it slide off N read it as the compound this another banger)
for years u called me ur favorite cuz every bar I drop is swell..
i’d do a name flip here, but ‘sun-orC’… lmaooo you wouldn’t have a shot in hell
( this one just was like Idk didn't set in with me)
so beatin me with forced wordplay that’s sour & played?!
you’re only ‘up to the Taskbar’ cuz ur on your computer 20 hours a day
(Sheesh why haven't I seen this np. If he has I'm sorry but I haven't n I been around him somewhat )
tellin Inf his bars are wack & would quickly get ripped apart..
i get it, he caused ur ‘exit from the Ship’.. it makes sense that you'd Disembark
( your just on a roll rn . the wp is working bothvwsys, phonetically sound and the tie ins are elaborate n creative)
it's an onslaught of head shots that are deadin you fag..
jabs’ll hit u high. ‘we’re talkin REALLL high til ur mumblin’ worse than Cred in the mag
( I didn't watch that but i can only imagine. The approach was saucy . to me this ok)
no Rafeli shit. ur a SNITCH faggot and you know it’s true…
real talk ‘Bar you’re Wearing a Wire, Brah’ & I ain't directin no Photoshoots
( * stares* ok I can't keep looking n trying to dig up gold that's not immediately present )
maybe i was a too harsh rippin on this bitch's anguish..
my bad dawg you’re not a sore loser... decapitation is quick & painless
( ok but laaazy close )
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Fucj what Niggas taking about this battle was concept gold
Here's the thing tho
Blue went for the throat on sum of that
Quotes are 4-5 blue but 2 couplets of blues could easilllll)y be determined as lotb
V/ blue
Goid showing to both tho
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It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you
Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople
Last edited by El Muffin; 04-13-2018 at 08:35 PM.
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