LOL Blue I wasn't so keen on Lil Vert because I could predict the line after the capitalised name pretty much, took some of the surprise factor out of it for me. See cups was nice. Cleaner line was straight clowning and that's more my shit, nice character assassination. Salt and Pepper I've seen done but Silverback was a great one, funny and follows up on the previous line well. Well played, sir. Suck-in was pretty much the same for me, it was cool but I wasn't as keen on that one tbh. I fucked with Nik at night though, good closer...
Nik: non stick was fresh and nice, LOL @ bikini top, that's more my shit. Couple missed for me after that until Thanksgiving, I liked the creativity in that. WAY GONE @ BLOCK TO BLOCK AHAHAHAHAHA LOTB FOR REAL! Butter bean was okay, didn't really get the closer so it prob went over my head but yeah, kinda close battle here because Blue tailed off at the end while Nik had a couple misses throughout then something crazy followed by a kind of solid closing run of lines before that last one which missed for me. Tough call. I gave the edge to blue though overall, largely because of consistency throughout rather than back to back misses like I felt Nik had at one spot before he got going again.
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