This was pretty tough for being a niche topical piece about machinery work. Or is it? You are reflecting the manual labor of "the working man" but intertwined with subtle, depressing connotations associated with your wording. Poor, such as nothing to eat, struggling to sleep, (stress), but you still go and "grind". I thought the photosynthesis line was dope, along with the shaved with an ox. Gave it a grimier feel when I read that bar. From top to bottom, I thought this piece was pretty clean.
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