interesting & some really good showings here... 8 lines battles like this are tough to call but I've got it
1) Infiltrate --- opener lol, ghost ship/flying Dutchmen was nice, thanos attack line was ill and damn at the closer, wordplay was awesome, especially with the meta associated.. really liked all 4 bars and concepts
2) Barc -- Infauna was dope af, fresh wordplay and possible lotb, mag in a beater a cool personal, closer was nice / a creative fresh concept.. only bar I felt edged it for Inf was while the opening wordplay was cool & I see what you were thinking it ended up being a minor jab & I fele the concept could've been made more impactful
3) Ghost --- acupuncture is dope af, especially with the twist/how it was worded - possible lotb, Kramer nameplay was cool and lol at the wording/swag in the closer... your wording and set-ups were very nice overall ... that said, the 3rd line cost you this imo, wasn;t "bad" or anything I just feel like it was pretty simple and retarded ideas eating him alive just wasn't that impactful.. could've done more with it
4) Nik - opener was cool ad a good punch, the make it home concept I saw lie 10 years ago on HF so it didn't have the same impact for me, 3rd line diablo/devils line was pretty mehhh to me, closer was dope & a funny personal
5) Diablo
6) Incredible
Fun read.
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