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Old 03-26-2018, 07:41 AM   #19
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Damn, close battle.. way closer than I expected..

Karpis had some lines but nothing that really had IMPACT behind it to hit and land, you know? Lay a beat down been done. Thanos was cool but more swag and flow type ish to me. Carter 5 was just okay. Rest I could have done without in all honesty. Not bad, just nothing that really stood out as harsh or fresh as fuck.

Dyna: You did better than I thought you would here, gun forensics been done previously but not bad, give him the piece was okay but again I've seen it before (think it was piece to your head like a hippie, but still similar) Arm extended/hitchhiker again was a cool idea but more swag and flow type ish to me so didn't really land as hard as it could have maybe? It's a close one. I think overall Karpis was the fresher of the two idea wise and had less misses, so I give him the nod. Barely.

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