bleak had fb chat & keys low
plot had a nice structured verse
bleak obv put up a quickie as most did this week. me included. i hated the justice league line., lol... apologies. IDK much about that rainbow bright kid other than the fact that i do find him to be a funny real life troll to the cali cats.
plot had potiental w.the hummingbird line, but i didn't like how it was executed. the problem w.plot, which has always been a issue w.him is he comes rly basic. wording structure is ideal for the site, he just needs to come much more creative w. what he says, imho.
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