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Old 03-22-2018, 11:36 AM   #14
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and now this wigga callin you a QUITTER when you plainly stated that you weren't trying to get famous or on stage and shit.

and legit gone at dude breaking down his own verse and giving himself feedback, jesus...



basic af, doesn't rhyme, vanilla af and doesn't flow for shit.

2 bars and he says shit like 8 times lol. I remember doing this in grade school rhyming.




you can't be even remotely living irl rite now lol.

GOLD? naw...

bronze teeth tho.



Your city is perfectly described as KC, like Kurt Cobain them niggas want to put a shotgun to their heads after a forced-listen of your new "banger".


the last 2 things that I've said are better concepts than you've ever written and I'm just playin. I'm just that much nicer, son.
This is why I'll never peep his shit again. He's delusional beyond repair.

V, please help him.
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