[Flow]

Rap hear me out on some advice - Freeposting is a no go round here - I understand why you did it and trust me its taken me a lot not to in one my most recent battles.....which I wont go into. JUST DONT DO IT.

Also - Sharp wasn't discouraging you and you will find he was actually being very constructive and helpful in his response, we have an extensive tutor section so why not use it?

Anyways -

Your breakdown...

RAP
... Its obvious death is about to die in shame/
cos wit Meduzza's power of mine.. I could make his life standstill without trying to tie him in pain/
No - No punch here
the niggurh should take a binocular,.. And watch his mouth/
cos the pig.. Digging up for vet's line would end up incapacitated when i punch his snout/
No punch
do i have to pull nines to make him take to his heel/
make him spit icing and sugary lines.. When i punch cake in his chin/
This didn't even rhyme and no punch except two lines on trot you said youll punch him... super fly shit that...
Death should know/
that he ain't ahead of God.. the tricks would show/
NO
he could be a motherless fagg, so i'll endeavour to murder him/
cos like he ain't a day-student in the vet's school, i'll bother him/boarder~digg
Probably the best attempt but poor exectution
i'll be fast to drop bars on him like i'd get paid by chocolate factory/
make him bleed honourarily like slashing consulate artery/
urgh....

DEATH
you got potential but withdraw cause u got no talent
he can't deposit a consistent verse when his accounts are out of balance
Pretty nice Don't think I seen the one before
aint slick w/ hoes, they see u as a behind doors cock thruster
ladies say my GameFly while yours'll shutdown whats in store like Blockbuster
I thought this was good but worded terribly
this pathetic virgin needs to phone 911, his future's hopeless
the only hot twins he's been close to collapsed when he approached them
meh not great
fuck rap, maestro couldn't get out this slump, it's the truth
if he really this old.. then this nika been trash since that guy was n his youth
lol so played but least you formulate a setup an punch right
im done went u, u trash so I went 10 instead of 12
cause u write like u was inspired by TI lyrics from when he was in jail
that didn't even rhyme an concept was whack

Vote death for having a much better understanding an better misses/attempts