Pretty varied verse, 1st bar, is this a mere statement or I am missing something? 2nd, seems familiar but the flip was aight, kinda funny bar. 3rd, I didnt get this :(. 4th, I liked the idea and punch was worded effective, your best effort in here imo. 5th, cool concept , but the word play doesnt work entirely. Rhymes\flow is aight. Overall a decent verse, shows potenital. Too bad you got no-show hoed here.
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