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Old 03-18-2018, 08:34 AM   #12
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Vote Schaden.

His verse way better worded and more effective as a whole, more direct attacks and overall a more entertaining read.
Profit had several potetential good ideas but was too wordy in most instances, I'm not a fan of long lines to get to some point. The 'flippin profit' was probably his best.
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