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Originally Posted by Incredible
@ DynamiCz Thanks for actually showing. decent verse man, voters said mine wasn't, but that's cool. Any other advice that anyone wants to throw out there would be cool. While I appreciate the votes, some don't offer much advice. Which is okay, I get that not every single voter is going to offer tips or advice due to time or just have no care to and just leave their opinion on who won. Understandable no doubt, any kind of criticism would be good. Thanks in advance. |
Your wording's decent, just stay focused on using harsher execution & more original/creative concepts.
I'll squeeze 4:44s and turn your drop to lemon juice
Don't worry kid, ill set it up real slick, make it look like your On The Run II
You tried incorporating 4:44/Lemonade/On The Run II, which is creative, but the your wording didn't give it much impact.