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Old 03-16-2018, 03:32 PM   #2
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I'm familiar with the source material and I could argue a few decrepencies to a fault. But, my personal understanding of such matters would probably seem even more outlandish than the content you so graciously chose to bless us with here today. I'm a conspiracy theorist at heart that is on an eternal quest to find the ''truth''. Of course no such thing exist in singularity. But I digress.

I've written many pieces that tackle these sorts of topics. But I dig what you did here. Without fact checking I'd say your words read true and confidently. Your flow was simple but effective and your imagery was extremely interesting. I thoroughly enjoyed the read and would encourage you to do a follow up to this verse. I'd like to see how deep down the rabbit holes goes. This was good. Really good. Part 2? I'll keep my eyes peeled. Peace.
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