Rawn...
Really felt your verse here....The flow was almost as smooth as glass imo and the inner rhymes and uwordage was sick
Cheayh...
I was feeling most of the content but there were some slow spots in there for me....Also Im not sure if its the form which you wrote it but it didnt flow to well....You have alot of imagery tho
Ima have to give this to Rawn strictly off a smother read...was more slick to me...Both had nice inner multies but I think Rawns was a bit better...
V/Rawn
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