Crazy shit, bro. Shit went from poetic to sensual to seductive to freaky to masochistic to sadistic to psychopathic to homicidal real quick. Not something I would normally write about on my own. Well, I could. I kinda of have, actually. But, only because it was a topical battle. In any case, you did the subject justice. Your flow was spotless as it always is. The imagery was gruesome and true to life (per usual). Rhythm. Pacing. Scene setting. All checked. The only critic anyone could give you on this would perhaps be the vulgarity of the content. Then again, that was kind of the whole point. Well, yeah, classic Geno. Dark. Poetic. And finely executed. Write more. And even more. Peace.
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