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Old 03-15-2018, 08:05 PM   #7
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Incredible was pretty off for me. Punches weren't exceptional and the rhyming was extremely basic at best, and forced at worst. Had a lot of site references that went over my head cuz I don't get the inside jokes.

Dynamicz was way better imo. First bar had multiple references to the punch and was pretty cool. The Disney, wall e, incredibles bars was pretty cool but I don't inherently know who Brad Bird is. I'm guessing he directed the incredibles. I'm able to figure out the bar and respect it but because I don't know this info already, it detracts from the impact. Last 2 lines were ok. Liked the latter better than the former.

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