Incredible was extremely simple, need to work on your rhymes and content, u got a decent structure just need alot of work.
Didn't see nothing stand out in ya verse.
Dynamicz
Thinking you fly, catch him on the runway in plain view, nothin partial
As he land..vest on for safety, sticks flashing when I wave like a aircraft marshall
You a force all of a sudden?..the baka break up the surge...Keri Hilson
Hat & glove, I'm between the base..U see hawks in field like Russell Wilson
Machine like Wall E, scope by his leg, my picks are dis knee..say a word
Or the headshot...the clips direct in Incredible like Brad Bird
All 3 of these were pretty solid, cool verse. Very one sided imo, but both stay up and keep dropping
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