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Old 03-15-2018, 09:31 AM   #8
Blue Bayou
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bitch found a stranger to take her pic in the city for fun
& that dress she wore was handy..for wiping jizz after giving him 1
no wonder she shook of the pole, j'look at her profile
her mobile says 19%. if my dick went 19%, she wouldnt be mobile
the ability to see's all i need for destroying this
a little Whittle get me far,
im just waiting for the jumanji plant to eat the annoying bitch

^LOTB for me, this concept is dope af
tbh she needs a bed or something. i said it cuz its fact, b
ur expresso hard for attention, its mila kunis on 11 cups of caffeine
naw, this is rude. i give props if its due, n look
she's a great catch, unfortunately u forgot to remove the hook
yes ok, i edit my bars for days when i write 'em down
i hav probs w my diss order, least i dont starve to stay under 90lbs


Overall a couple really nice lines with some other solid ones.. Misses to me - what are barberries? And You can't see her knees

vs.


Heard you write bars for days, i keyed this geek a hours work cus its all hes worth
Your such a nerd he saw this birds bikini an said the Ns missing from the word
^LoL
Nose like a fucking rhino horn bro, proof is right there
I posted a clean ex, you posted a kleenexs worst nightmare
She dont need support, thats a double entendre right there
Cus she put up the blinds but im going all in on her small pair
This aint aeros girl, so whys ya girls grill barking like he'd eat her
Head with enough canines to make Cerebus slow it's growl to a whimper
Im frying this bird like the colonel, but feelin kinda awkward
Cus i asked for a 2 piece thats hot and saucy, in other words this isnt what I ordered
^^These last 2 concepts are bananas .. Cerebus dope af -- that said, the set-ups / multi's are pretty bad tbh

Your highs were dope as fuck and this was an enjoyable verse...


Overall this was a great read & what a tough call... ya'll sleepin on the Jumanji bar

To me this is the classic better overall wording & consistency vs. better standouts but more misses

I've got Barcotic by a bar ... could see it going either way

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