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Old 03-15-2018, 01:28 AM   #6
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Schadenfreude View Post
Swear yo verses straight hot fire, but they mild as shit,
only got L’s for putting that em together, thats an allen wrench.

dont think u meant to put "that em"... check ya bars b4 u drop or be confident ur oppnt is a bitch n takes forever, so u have time to notice n fix. otherwise this would have ben fire

Shove the pistol in your face to get yo bravado in check
a quick press’ll have ya switching type after the auto-correct.

pretty gd

I’ll simply state yo boring bars not worth quoting, tool..
only reason ppl even read yo battle's due to the voting rule.

stale, but it sort of hit still

Robotic bars won't get u far w/o style, swagger or pull,
a drunk white tavern slut.. you love riding that mechanical bull.

cool enough

Through out the mag they tried to hype ya calm bombs
& could only show a couple love, you've been writing RomComs.

nahh

S’in my pocket, dubs a gimme, wasting rhymes, stop it,
guaranteed every last vote in this charity battle’s a non-Profit.

dope

Bitch I’m up at a level you haven’t the chance to match
free parking - I will body u on the spot, this is your handicap.

couple minor wording issues, but dope concept

Mfer my record clearly shows I put bodies into caskets,
it's an obvious loss Prophecy, he should’ve known this’d happen.

not a great np
vs

Quote:
Originally Posted by Profit View Post
I got luv fa every writer, but in battle u can trust I'll off um w/a ratchet
So s'no hate when I throw Schade, in war it's a must I toss him in a casket

not only is it a played np, but it's also not how u pronounce the first part of his name.. similar to using a car np on karaoke

U clowned Bar fa cryin, that's cool cos I ain't denyin the guys fits
But when U lose u stay quiet fa weeks.... pussy u do all ur cryin in private

simple, but it hit. altho i had a hard time giving "guys fits" a pass, this was a light hit

This text shits a hobby tho, right? Well that makes 2 of us son
But when I body u bruh, think party pooper, Im here to ruin the fun

ehh, lacked impact. felt like the concept needed something else

U show up to all ya battles & drop weak, landin a worthless percentage
S'like hiring a reliable idiot, all u got going for u is perfect attendance

decent

To act wild is funny, ur name plays r trash & ur wack style is bummy
u'll be the only faggit flippin profit & still be assed out of money

now this was fire, gd shit. more of this plz

Proof u ain't got chips is in ya thot pic, that slop trick is a life waisted
So fuck sayin ya knots thick, when u score hoes that's not thick in the right places

this was OK, couldve used some polishing to make better

Cheap sluts, even the homeless hit ya crib when u leave cuz
To them ya spots the headquarters, cos s'only 25 cent to get ya meat sucked

lolll nice

Most don't believe in this stuff,but I tell the future, hammers out, piece to ya mug
Think that's absurd clown then S'Raptors 1st round.. either way u'll get the heat or the bucks

whats weird is this concept is both mad played out annnd fresh at the same time. i can dig the current angle on it
so schad had
3 gd punches
3 jabs
& 2 misses

profit had
3 gd punches
3 jabs
& 2 misses

ffs, that didnt help
this is cloooooose

ima have to come back to it

hate to do it but ill have to re-read the battle a couple x and im tryna watch a show rn
dope match tho fellas, ill be back 100

EDIT
v/Schadenfreude
after few reads back, im soley basing this decision on oveall creativity & substance
this could def go either way, style preference IMO
matter of fact im shocked that the votes are so leaned to either 1 way or the other... i think its a lot closer than other battles this week, excluding bb & destro's
props to both, n congrats to whoever earns the shot

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