The main problem is the simplicity of it. There was a time where I could freestyle this shit. The lyrics and your flow are way too basic. Challenge yourself to be more inventive. I don't care about the subject matter as long as it's dope, if you're writing at an elementary level then nothing you say will entice me to give your material a listen.
And if you're going to record diss tracks, stop with the generic filler.
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