Facts came out the gate slow. Didn’t care for the opener at all, but landed the next x men/gambit punch. Nothing crazy but I though it landed. The LG flip was decent as well.
The “dicks he gone south on” bar was prob the best material Facts had. I don’t think the set up was great but it was still a good punch. Pretty creative. Didn’t like the next two bars. Ended decent. The lidocaine bar was basic but the punch landed imo. Pretty good round. Lot of jabs. Nothing really crazy.
Lyf put himself at a disadvantage by rapping 8 bars. However, he started out with a pretty good Sheen name flip. Punch landed. I like the fear factor word play but the punch wasn’t really there. I think the bar landed though.
I like that you took the fax machine angle but I think you coulda done more and ended it with a punch. Felt like kinda a filler bar but it was better than Facts’ filler bars. Ended strong. The “score peon”/“finish him” waste bar of the battle. I liked that you flipped his avi against him.
Overall I thought it was a close battle. To me it came down to quality over quantity. Facts punches felt more like jabs and Lyf had the two best lines over the battle (his opener and closer). Facts bars flowed together and rhyme better that Lyf. Lyf might need to clean his rhyme schemes up a bit before next battle.
Overall, I narrowly edged the battle to Lyf. You made it closer than it should have been by having less material. Still I think you had the better wordplay and heavier punches.
Vote: Lyfzaa Gamble
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