This one was closer than those votes make it look at 3-0 in Muff's favour, for real...
Muff had that misplaced moles and worlds ugliest substitute teacher shit that was straight up jokes ahahahaha soft two was nice as well. Few people commented on the wording but I honestly didn't mind, thought you did well considering how quick you got this up and had some good observations in there mixed with some clownage. Solid verse throughout, no real lows to it, consistently good hits.
Bleak: You had LOTB with that Gateway punch for real, that was ill. Angelina was a cool idea and worded the wordplay well but maybe drew the punch out a little too much that time, if you had executed it in less words it would have hit harder. Nice idea though I thought conceptually. Dreadlocks was much the same here this time out, I enjoyed the idea but the execution maybe took a little of the sting away from them. Muff was guilty of the same to an extent this time out too so it's no slight against you, just trying to give you something to work on for future battles. There wasn't a great deal between the two of you here, the main thing was exactly that - Muff kept the hits consistently good or above that where the wording in some of bleak's maybe room away from the sting of the punchline and allowed Muff to take it. It's certainly closer than the votes look right now, but ultimately it's hard to argue against Muff winning this. Dude did his thing. Bleak continues to improve verse after verse.
Muff got it.
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