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Woke · 03-11-2018, 10:12 AM

A story about a relationship and a story about a guy rambling about how hard life is. Darker ego was more captivating as well as had the better flow, although diaries and praiers don't rhyme at all. They're pronounced completely different, which leads me to assuming English is not your first language??? 2triple verse read as a guy simply complaining, "woe is me" over and over again, which grew very stagnant mid way through. Ego kept me guessing, and kept part of the verse hidden in shadows a bit. He definitely had the more enjoyable read for me.

Vote: darker ego

03-11-2018, 10:12 AM	#6
Woke Senior Member Join Date: May 2015 Posts: 183 Battle Record: 6-4 Rep Power: 553415	A story about a relationship and a story about a guy rambling about how hard life is. Darker ego was more captivating as well as had the better flow, although diaries and praiers don't rhyme at all. They're pronounced completely different, which leads me to assuming English is not your first language??? 2triple verse read as a guy simply complaining, "woe is me" over and over again, which grew very stagnant mid way through. Ego kept me guessing, and kept part of the verse hidden in shadows a bit. He definitely had the more enjoyable read for me. Vote: darker ego Last edited by Woke; 03-12-2018 at 08:10 AM.