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Old 03-10-2018, 11:26 AM   #12
Pinot Grij
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Barc - props, I'm trying to solve this Olemet wp like it's an expert level sudoku. No idea what you're talking about though, lol. damn.
Hold weight was funny.
Sublet isn't a hit for me.
Duel plays is at least a different concept. I like the idea, not huge on the execution though.
Closer is funny.

Yo, I respect your commitment to this super short bar style. It's working in points for you, but working against you at times too. You haven't nailed it 100% but kudos for trying something new.

Letterman

Buster Douglas flip worked but wasn't the most original concept - medium hit
Knot - not feeling
Open mike was dope. Only thing is I didn't even know Barc's name is Mike, so the nameplay is a bit hard to connect for me at first.
Pepsi commercial relies on this same premise. a bit dated on the reference.
Menorah is in Omelet territory for me bro.
Robin style is cool but a little indirect.

This isn't an easy call because neither really grabbed the battle from the other. Letterman's first two bars were cool, but Barc had 3 that hit for me. I got it 3 to 2 for Barc.

Vote -- Barcotic
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