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Originally Posted by Killing Spree
It’s wild when someone with terrible wording tells you wording killed your verse.
Oh well
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If you're thinking about me... Well, I'm from Norway and this is my second language, mostly self taught at that too cus I couldn't stand school when I was a young shithead. What's your excuse?
Also, it's always easier to recognize things in other peoples verses than your own as you're oblivious to your own mistakes until they're pointed out to you. Shit's difficult when most of the words is shit you've learned by reading and maybe even never heard, perhaps only the definitions of instead of verbal/in a sentence or in passing. How can I compete with that in the long run unless people point it out to me? How are you going to get better if you're bitter and salty about shit being pointed out in your verse if it's on point regardless of where it comes from? Feel free to correct me so I know until next time tho, that's how I learn. That's how everyone learns.
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I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave,
So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave.
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