This is a good 'un.
ZeeDee: All jokes aside from what happens in the prediction threads, you're a helluva writer and this was a perfect example of that. This piece flowed perfectly from multi to multi with the scheme constantly switching up so it doesn't become overly repetitive. The story itself I actually found very entertaining as well. Specifically when Charlie is throwing hand grenades at "Charlie" at the the party only to find out he's old and crazy. The last line was the perfect way to end this too. Well done.
pohfig: I really don't even know where to start with this piece lol. Very well written and when I was reading this it seemed very calming to be honest. I'm probably the only person that's gonna say that but forreal the way you worded everything made this an easy read with a lot of meaning behind it. I can't say I actually enjoyed the story behind this, but it shows allot of creativity and I think your writing pulled it off and made it work. Very good writing here.
This is probably BOTW. Voting could go either way on this one, but I got ZeeDee. Great battle.
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