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Old 03-04-2018, 09:36 PM   #4
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i've never been a league cat. dabbled in the occasional tourney.

i'm also going to suggest you don't weigh the external validation (success in tourneys and leagues) too heavily when writing is this inherently internal pursuit - at least i think it is.

so take what i say with a pinch of salt if those are your ends, i'm atypical. i could have guessed this was for something like that. i also haven't read you too tough to give an overview of your entire style, i was commenting on this verse, of course.

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