rude- 1st stanza was dope.. 2nd was okay and the third was fuckin awesome. you kept up throughout. your art of storytellin is really enticing it baits me to keep readin. you structured it and flowed it smoothly. theres rlly not too much wrong with this piece, its dope as fuck.
Activate self - you flexed lyrically on this. multi syllables everywhere that never rlly stopped resonating with the inner rapper in me. definitly won in the flow, structure n lyrics department.. this was fuckin sick.
rude had the better story telling as well as imagery. Self was lyrically astounding but rude was good enough in that area to put a great story together.
this was honestly a pleasure to read. dope battle
vote - rude
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