well man its cool.. im not tryin to shit on ur track tbr.
this is definitly good enough to show off to friends and family.
i think it qualifies for that signature deep track on the last spot of the album. what you do with the rest of it will determine the direction it goes.
I wuldnt give up on 'blowin up' tho. the definition to that is vague and varied.. you can do shows in your area and collect enough revenue to kick back and enjoy the job title of rapper. you have the foundation set in place to be somethin actually really good.. just takes dedication to continue improvin.
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