Joe B -- I liked the inverted spine lotv. And coke bottle, animaniacs & earth flat concepts.......problem was it read rushed & couldnt get into the lines bc wording/syllable count. I see u tho. So a few big misses for me. Nice attempt gettin it up fast tho. Props
Muff -- Hock loogie lotb, AWOL,
Fusion was coo.
I enjoyed this verse tbr.
The references were cool evn tho the sultan & gacy punches were okish. I still liked the comparisons.
I f'ked w that ring off line lol, simple af but effective imo.
Cropped was decent to me. Some wording was off at points.
Vote -- Muff
Last edited by Saint; 03-03-2018 at 11:09 AM.
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