I love topical battles.. but the format is horrible.. each writer should have to write about the same thing with a direct topic.
First writers crytric poetic style just misses the mark.. its hard to follow. Maybe i would feel this more as a poetry piece .
2nd writers style was easier to follow but what is the topic? "All day" .. bars were stretched a bit and would be hard to fit to a beat.. but overall i liked this better..
Vote - 2tripple0
Dont get me wrong im not knocking either of you. Both talented writers but i think the format of the tournament set up people to fail.
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