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Old 03-02-2018, 02:41 AM   #6
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swear I've got this sewn up, you're the lightest of work.
Got him on pins and needles like people getting high in the burbs.

Cool play, feeling it.

Leave this bitch in stitches when I'm writing a verse.
While we'd only see Dar' nit in the threads like he's not trying to curse.

Nice nameplay, wording could have been better.

He's a no-one, and I'm quite sure we're well aware.
We'd only see D.E. put on the map if we're talking 'bout Delaware.

Lol dope

You'll get stabbed and bladed for your average statements.
Even the crowd'll give him Sighs when a cut leaves his breath exasperated.

Decent

Don't even try to start, faggot, you don't make money in a large bracket.
Only way you'd turn a mint on display is basketball with March Madness.

Clever, feeling it

Crowd's asking for a raft, cause this man's a frail nerd.
We see even the row's paddling away, you're a Titanic failure.

Not really feeling this, decent concept though


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When it comes to rap you are like a stand up comedian but without the humor
Rejected lame Fuck your rumors, You are an infection in the game like enormous tumors

Like the flow, but very basic punch

Face sudden karma When the serpent is allure, Flowing toxic infecting all the pure
Instead of serving the cure mangle your corpse with a tractor and leave it fermenting in manure

Pretty hard hitting but no real concept behind it, but i dig it

The handsome lord Mentoring your crew, Serve you headless in a stew for the legends and the few
End review, Am a Devil to you, that`ll slice your reputation with A Hanzo sword and sever it in two!!

Great multies, cool bar

Ma rhymes on point like thorns in a ***tus, Bombing your status, Devour your world like galactus
You need a whole swat team, countless marines in machines and a thousand special forces to track us

Again good flow, but not direct enough

I pound keys like a statistician make you dissappear on scene like a slick Magician
Not a problem on the mission for a liric technician I`ll Solve this kid like a mathematician!!!

Good flow but simple punch....

In stage, Shine so much A blind ya vision, Counter your love poems with a violent diction
You are hopeless, Misplaced, leave you throatless with a blades after A signed petition

Good finish

Overall this was a decent battle, feel like D.e needs to work on his punches and using some nameplays because hes got a great flow but that's where he lacked here when erron had a solid verse was more direct and more creative.

Vote erron black
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