Muff has..
cropped.out bar
Awol and mia
Fusion dance
Hock a loogie
Lol. Started rough muffy ole boy. But you dug in a little harsher in the middle towards end. Much better wording in the battle which helps a ton this week
Boston had..
Gastric bypass line.. Needed better wording to me coulda hit harder
Coke bottle shit coulda been dope but again ..wording
Anmaniacs coulda been a fresh joint but wording is killing you man. To wordy and just fumbling through your concepts. The ideas are there man. You just need smoother transitions and harder punches for them. U struggled with it pretty bad here..
I got muff witb a mire polished berse. All around just hit harder and worded way better for more impact. Joe boston aint a lost cause he just needs to get his concepts to hit harder. Less words and better placement would do wonders man. I see u tho
V/grandfathermuffy
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