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Old 05-28-2013, 12:58 AM   #7
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I thought rawns verse was cool, that first part where the multi shifted gradually (Bowser - outdone) was slick. That leviathan line kinda felt off when I was read it, thought more coulda been done in that line but otherwise I have no complaints. Imagery was nice.

Chyeah had some funny ideas with nice multis and imagery. I really enjoyed reading that flex. Can't really find anything to criticize from either drop, it might be my battler instinct telling me to go with who's concepts I liked more so feel free to discount this, but I edge it to chyeah for having that more out there swag I dig

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