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Originally Posted by Barcotic
how did that closer go over yall heads tho fr
it was fire but not acknowledged
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Because of the way you worded it.
"beach pranks 101: i got the body covered, ima head out"
Ideal delivery is as natural as conversation, even when read.
The punch is clever, but reads awkwardly cuz most of us wouldn't say it that way.
"..same as a beach prank: cover the body then head out"
..that reads better, even though it's still not that hard hitting imo.