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Originally Posted by Destroyer
Although sometimes it goes over well
For example, I wrote a verse recently with the punchline
“Des’ll aim at this clown’s mouth & won’t stop until I win the giant stuffed bear.”
That shit is basically nonsense but it went over really well
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That's not nonsense though. Anyone who's been to a fair knows you shoot a stream of water into a clown's mouth until the balloon poops and you get a stuffed bear.
This would only be nonsense if your second line didn't make some sort of connection.
What was the next line?
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Drunk in the club, let a nigga say somethin'...
I'll have him fall victim like the nigga base jumpin',