Good read from start to finish.
esp was diggin this..
Its a shame you only met my sociopathic persona,
Mistook the tree for the forest, the bee for the hornet;
The shadowy silhouette for the rest of the being in the portrait.
Pressing my heart against the crest of your sternum.
The rate your heartbeats reveals the breadth of your person.
everything mashed together.. the vocab wasnt too extreme for the flow of the piece but enough to provide intricate detail that definitly peaks the mind of the reader not to mention u remained in structure which all in all kept me reading. Rlly aint got nothin bad to say about this
u shuld drop in the write week 9 at the top of the page. also join the league
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