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Originally Posted by Lyriscologist
yo,
where these kats at to Match my Last Moves,
Smash the Wack Crews..
Hand me Daps Too or go Back to Rap School..
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Man, L, that shit sounds old school as fuck, bruh. But, it's also kind of funny and perfectly worded. I dig it.
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i aint Grabbing my Pants to Flash some Dance Moves,
..with hands on my nuts like a Pack of Cashews..
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LOL You a fool, bro. But, your timing is on point. Your wording … your flow … both in the pocket.
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my Ink is an Art like I'm Branding Tattoos,
I'll Rip you Apart going Track for Track Dude!
if you dont Have the Haps? well, ..you Can Advance Too,
just Have a Plan..
Master That and Pass the Bad News,
That's a Fact..!
..the Bads we Have Entraps our Past in Back Rooms,
but the Tracks we Have Exactly Mapped a Path Through..
(..And we Have Proof!)
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Eh, the scheme (as always) was solid. But this section was all flow. There wasn't much substance or food for thought to digest. The tattoo line was cool. The rest was filler. I was hoping the "have a plan … master that" part was going to lead to something profound. Like a life gem or jewel. But it didn't. Which kind of disappointed me.
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my Aftermath'll make the Planet Crack in Half Too!
while I'm Packing up some Hash then Blasting Past the Half Moon,
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Dope.
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That's True!
you'd never Beat the Bone, See me Fold or Speak a Flow Wack,
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That's a clever play on the whole BTNH and Wack 100 beef. I doubt most will catch the references or understand the context in which they were used; but (not so) ironically I was watching something on YouTube about it just the other day.
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I'mma Beast who Grows to Peaks Unknown, I've Reached the Snow Caps..
got the Deepest Poems, Reaping Souls.. you People Know That..!
start Receiving Blows, then Retreat and Hope to Keep a Close Stance,
No Chance!
to Compete with Bone.. Believe in Hope and See your Own Path,
but Keep it Dope.. I'm Defeating Hoes with Free's or Note Pads,
Completely Though.. you'd Need to Clone Emcees with Pro Stats
cuz I'm not an Easy Foe.. Speech Explodes to Eat your Whole Camp!
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The flow is crazy. The swagger is evident. I dig the self hype and the shit talk. However, I think you might have missed a golden opportunity to throw in an Easy E pun. Especially considering his connection to Bone and the West Coast. I say that because you threw the word "Easy" in the scheme, but I'm not sure if it's suppose to be an entendre or not, Nonetheless, this section is still tight.
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just Know THAT!
y'all Rhyming Poor!
while I was Born Rapping,
either Try to Form your Mind some More or Find the Door Slamming!
I'll, Slide a Sword Inside your Corpse til I get Bored At It...
you'll, Find the Floor when I get Your, Spinal cord Crackin'!
(Bitch!)
..I am Lord..!
Disguised a Normal Guy Reborn Frantic,
to Guide this Sport!
so Write and Score your Final Four Brackets!
..I've Explored the Lines you Force..
no Time for Your Antics..!
cuz I can ..
Lighten Your Status with the Slightest War Tactics!
eezee
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Well, at this point, I don't think anyone should be questioning you multi stacking ability. You're dope with the flex. We might need to do a sparing session/collab sometime in the near future. With that said, this was another really fun and entertaining read from you.
OAN. Check this link whenever you can (
Crack The Mic!), I think you might dig it.
Stay solid, L. Peace.