Des had that louisville line which I thought was pretty smooth for the wording.
I thought he had a dope opener as well but that fucking Owen Wilson line...nahhh
man that shit made me feel dirty just trying to make that work. either way the verse was cool
Allen had that opener, connects with pussies & that closer which were all done well.
of course the other 2 punches I had to google just the same to get were pretty dope.
my issue is you did the same thing Des did by stretching language/damage together.
i dont know if either of you have accents or what but they just threw me through a loop.
either way Im going to have to go with Allen on this one, the punches were more consistent.
although both of you got me fucked up thinking those slants worked well. idk though thtats just me
v/Allen Knight
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