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Old 02-18-2018, 12:39 PM   #14
Flow
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Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: West Mids
Posts: 3,861
Battle Record: 57-49

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- 50 Wins

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- BA Rookie Tourney
- 1-2 Punch League (x2)
- Pandemonium Cypher
- 1-2 Punch league Season 9

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No offence to profit but i really struggled with yours here. I couldnt find one bar i liked, not to say i cant see the jabs in there but for a contenders i expected some haymakers an got none. Also the wording just seemed off, there was something in each of the first 3 bars but i dont know, just didnt work didnt hit direct. Overall its not a bad drop (flips age line stands out) just expected more. No hate i enjoy your drops usually.

Habitat underrated i thought his drop was fresh, in contract to profit i really enjoyed nearly all your bars. I mean again there was alot more jabs then id like but the whole thing was smooth reading an fresh. I just really enjoyed the constant turn of phrase. Heavy heart closer an bullet heart line to name a few favs. Opener was weak but yeah, enjoyed this.

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