Thought this was pretty hot man. Wording was on point throughout. A lot of swagger to it. I like your writing style.
Standouts were the Aero line which was dope. The actual Karaoke wordplay was something I've never seen before which is surprising, it worked well. Closer was creative and current. Character development was clever. I liked the Orca flip too. Obviously been done before but the delivery was smooth.
Anyway yea I really liked this verse. Keep it going.
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