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Old 02-17-2018, 12:47 PM   #10
Pinot Grij
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Habitat -- foregiveness/heart line was dooope. I try to play with concepts like this sometimes but can never seem to stick them. Otherwise, some good jabs but the wordplay just felt a lil unoriginal.. Samoa, Farewell, All Rights Reserved... it was cool but not attention grabbing.. closer was nice too.

Profit
Speaking of jabs -- Profit had some decent little lines, but I didn't feel a knockout punch or a clever line that really ended it for me. Sour diesel is cool -- RB is aight -- boy band feels like it comes out of nowhere. I guess I feel like there wasn't a lot of pointed, harsh lines towards your enemy. Maybe it was a wording thing, but it felt off.

Vote -- Habitat ... that forgiveness line was the knockout punch in this one for me
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