[Adonis]

Rude - I liked the worldscape created, this is a very believable one as well. Loved the concept of a half robot half human saying "it hurts because it hurts", the feeling of pain is human, maybe not physical pain, but emotional pain. the feeling of losing a girl, or guy I guess, cause you mentioned oxytocin. In any case, this realization was dope. You built a story around a robotic world where the less human "humans" rule, but yet, you feel something. All in all, I actually really enjoyed this verse. You took me in a world and really did give the photo life. But you also stayed on track as far as concept goes. Good read, one of my favorites this week.


Sammy - A verse a bout Daunte's Inferno almost. Short and sweet and too the point, though the point was a bit muddled. You created an equally dope world, I prefer the darker side of life, so a helish landscape is alluring to me. This verse was good, I mean I don't have any real girlpes really. But....considering the lack of detail yours contains verses your opponents, you were simply outshined here in my eyes.


v/ Rude


Two really good verses, but if they are equally good and one has double the amount of good, well, there you go unfortunately